在越南時間4/22晚上21點19分26秒
我的紛絲專頁#李鼎的也不賴
突然出現了這張黑色的截圖
截圖來自我最新的作品「我在台61」電影版的最後一張劇情
那是整部片到最後所有主創人員名單出來前的最後一個畫面
應該所有作品最後一個畫面
都是極為重要的
而「我在台61」卻是選了三個字最為結束
叫做「路上見」
並用了三位主角:李亦捷、楊鎮、福地祐介的聲音詮釋
而這個來自越南的讀者的截圖留話
竟是把這句話的翻譯
圈了起來
給了一的大問號
並寫了「MEET」
這樣的截圖
好像看到小學作業老師對於你的作業不滿意
而做的舉動
面對電影最後一個畫面被人截圖
然後用了小學老師批改作業的方式
留在你公開的粉絲專頁
換成是你
你會怎麼想?
我有點高興
因為
我一直知道自己跟自己創作的團隊在做什麼
所以有一種
拍片拍了這麼久
終於有人
會對我們英文翻譯的團隊
提出想法了
而且來自越南
(原來現在連越南都看得到這部電影了)
於是我立刻去電美國給我們這部電影的翻譯
他當然也第一時間看了這位來自越南女士的臉書帳號
確定不是傳說中的「網軍」
於是
翻譯朱倩儀小姐
就用中英文
一起回應了這位來自越南的阮女士
關於「ME」與「meet」
在這部作品裡的概念
分享朱倩儀小姐的留言
也很樂見
最後這位阮女士
在留言板上的回應
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親愛的阮女士,
謝謝您的指教!我萬分感謝您觀賞這部電影,而且給予我們您寶貴的意見。
您建議在劇終「我們 路上見」(Let’s Me Again, on the road.) 應該是(Let’s Meet again, on the road)。您的建議在標準文法完全是正確的。但可以容許我為您解釋一下最終導演仍採用了我們使用「me」的想法嗎?
語言本就是一多層次的表達工具。中文尤其美麗,尤其一個簡單的用字可以有好多不同的心思。
在接到這份翻譯的殊榮時,我是既興奮又緊張的。李鼎導演的詩意作家特質,及對角色,故事的詮釋,描寫及張力,絶對不是平舖直敘就能感受到他的初衷,他的溫度。所以,明知冒險,我還是選擇做了大膽的嘗試。我和團隊(二位ABC) 經由彼此對各自語言及文化的了解,試著把李亦捷,Ray (楊鎮)及福地佑介的個性,藉由使用語言的個性,帶入他們的對話裏。
因著「台61」而讓他們三位相遇,也延伸了之後的故事。在從最初Ray 安靜的推著重機不願打擾到海鳥的開始,第一個「me」就出現了,然後是亦捷⋯所以。
在最後,當三個人,開心但不捨地以咖啡乾杯後的分道揚鑣, 許下再見面的心願時,這是李鼎導演在影片中第二次使用「路上見」(第一次在福地祐介留給李亦捷的紙條中)(第一次我們翻譯使用的是:See you on the Road),而當第二次再度使用「路上見」並用在片尾,使用三位角色的聲音,我們覺得意義非凡,不再來自於See you on the Road的想像,決定讓中文中的詩意,翻成Let’s Me again, on the road.這讓三個角色心中無論是吶喊,低訴或是緯緯道來,我想,都是由她/他的心「me!」「 Let’s Me...」讓我,在路上再次遇見你。
很感謝李鼎導演給了我和團隊這樣美好第一次翻譯的經驗,我仍有許多需要進步的空間,也期望因著這部「我在台61」, 我們都因此有共享的公路,感動及連結。
再次謝謝你也觀賞「我在台61」,所以我們相遇,聽到彼此的聲音。
Dear Ms. Nguyễn
Thank you so much for the comments. I am so grateful that you watched the movie and given valuable comments. Please allow me to explain the usage of “me” here ( I am responsible to translate the scripts.)
Yes, you are absolutely right on the “ Let’s MEET” again!” in most of the circumstances. But I am humbling to say that my purpose of translating the word “meet” to “me” is trying to emphasis on the willingness of “coming back on the road again” from three individual main characters. They are all cheering up for their fate to be together because of Highway 61. So I thought they would shout out loud from their hearts to say “let’s me again, on the road!” to echo the director Lee’s poetic style.
Like every language, it’s never easy to complete portrait the whole story from one to another. A simple word could have few different meaning in the culture. It’s truly my pleasure had the opportunity to translate the Chinese( or Taiwanese) story to English. There are so many beautiful words and touching moments that just can’t change words to words. And each characters has her/his personality and tones. Therefore, I try to adopt the heart of story with the understanding of English that I think it would sound most authentic for each characters. This has been an amazing experience to me, walking along with director Lee to see my country and helping to deliver the landscape, the sea breeze, the birds, the temple...and the Highway 61 to you in different language.
Thank you again for the heart of going through the Highway 61 journey with us, and share your thoughts!
Btw, it’s very nice meeting you here. Could I assume you may from Vietnam? My husband is also from Vietnam and we live in Colorado now.
Regards,
Chien Yi 朱倩儀 (Chienyi Luu)
#我在台61
#發現動人的翻譯故事
#很喜歡這樣的創作互動
#也為這部作品的每一個人感到驕傲與開心
#語言很奇妙
#中文尤為奇妙
#這部片的日文也是一種很神奇的遭遇
「我在台61」中英文電影版傳送門
https://youtu.be/uhPTvLBNRo0
同時也有1部Youtube影片,追蹤數超過7萬的網紅Uncle Siu,也在其Youtube影片中提到,http://siuenglish.com 朋友到我書房坐,有一刻我忙著別的事情,沒時間招呼她,她在書桌上隨手拿起一本書看,隨手翻到頁角折起的某一頁。她讀了一兩分鐘,呆住了,抬頭看著我。我問她:「好正,係咪?」她說是。那是莎士比亞的 sonnets 詩集,朋友翻到的是第四十八首 sonnet,是我...
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下面有中文👇🏻 #文小長希望讀完
I don’t often tell people this
If you’ve seen my news report
You’d know that I use to be a pro
One of the top in tennis
And yet years later,
Not once have I tried to tell people
Truth be told
For about 10 years of my life
I spent most of my childhood on the court
Regardless of the weather
That’s where I’d spend most of my days
You’d be surprised
The reason why I don’t kiss and tell
Well... is because I took no pleasure
Training was tough
Discipline was harder
But that was nothing compared to my life
For those who know me well
They know I am an optimistic person
But it has taken me a long time to get here
Cause truth be told
I had a very disturbing childhood
I don’t know if it was because of my personality
But for six years, I was severely bullied
Most of the time verbally, but sometimes physically
I tried ever so hard to fit in
But whatever I did,
Nothing seemed to do the trick
I am not proud of my past
Despite the glory and all
I’d rather forget my childhood
I’d rather have amnesia
Anything would be easier than to
Have to go through that torture again
As time has passed
Though some who were horrendous have apologized
Others have never thought of their damage
Overall, there is just more pain than glory
If you know me, you know that I am strong
I am not someone who shows their vulnerability that easily
But for once, I think I owe everyone the truth
Thank you bullies for making me stronger
Because of you, I have learnt that
- Self love is important
- No one is more deadlier than your own mind
- When you stop caring about what other people think about you, life is much more bearable
- A happy day is always a better day
- When I am that much better, one day, you will look up at me
Finally, I would like to thank all the people that have helped me through my dark days, whether it would be friends, family, or loved ones. Thank you for tolerating me with all of your compassion. I am better because of you.
Don’t worry, your kindness will be rewarded when the time comes.
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我有件事情很少告訴他人
或許你們看完我的報導後猜到了
曾經 在很久以前 我是個中華隊選手
或許不是最頂尖的 但也有不錯水準
這麼多年來 這麼光榮的事情
我卻一次都不曾告訴他人
老實說
人生中有10年待在網球場上
童年在球場上隨風而去
無論天氣如何
球場幾乎是天天報到的地方
但你萬萬沒想到
之所以不喜歡告訴他人我的這番過去
是因為... 它是痛苦的
訓練當然辛苦 但球員誰不是這樣
年紀輕輕學會自律 當然也是一番挑戰
但這些辛苦沒辦法與我的生活品質比較
那些在生活中與我很親很熟的人
他們都知道我其實蠻樂觀開朗的
但老實說 今天能這樣也是花了很久時間調適的
因為我的童年不堪回首
以前常常聽到是我個性問題
但六年整整 每一天總是要忍受不斷的言語霸凌
有時甚至會有生理上的傷害
即使再怎麼改 再怎麼合群
無論再怎麼努力 很少有愉悅的一天
我對我的未來並不榮耀
即使成績再怎麼揮霍
我寧可忘了這個童年
我寧可失憶
任何事情都比起那個生活好
隨著時間的過去
部分曾對我厭惡之極的霸凌者回頭道歉了
但仍有一些人不認為自己有造成傷害
比較下來 我寧願不想記起這麼多的負面情緒
如果你懂我 你就會知道我很堅強
我並不是一個隨便讓人看到我軟弱一面的人
但事到如今 我覺得我欠大家這回真相
我要感謝當初霸凌我的人
因為你們 我學會
- 怎麼愛自己
- 自己的意識與信念才是最惡毒的敵人
- 當你停止在乎他人時,生活會變得很美好
- 快樂也是一天 難過也是一天 選擇快樂吧
- 當我把自己變得強大時 有一天 你們會低頭
最後,我想感謝人生說陪我經歷風風雨雨與各種黑暗時期的家人/朋友/至親們。因為有你們寬大的包容,才能造就今天的我。因為你們,我變得更好。
有一天,我一定會報答你們這份溫暖
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it would be my pleasure中文 在 Uncle Siu Youtube 的最佳解答
http://siuenglish.com
朋友到我書房坐,有一刻我忙著別的事情,沒時間招呼她,她在書桌上隨手拿起一本書看,隨手翻到頁角折起的某一頁。她讀了一兩分鐘,呆住了,抬頭看著我。我問她:「好正,係咪?」她說是。那是莎士比亞的 sonnets 詩集,朋友翻到的是第四十八首 sonnet,是我最喜歡的幾首之一,當然正。詩歌,還是用影片講解比較好。去片吧。
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原文:
How careful was I, when I took my way,
Each trifle under truest bars to thrust,
That to my use it might unused stay
From hands of falsehood, in sure wards of trust!
But thou, to whom my jewels trifles are,
Most worthy comfort, now my greatest grief,
Thou best of dearest and mine only care,
Art left the prey of every vulgar thief.
Thee have I not locked up in any chest,
Save where thou art not, though I feel thou art,
Within the gentle closure of my breast,
From whence at pleasure thou mayst come and part;
And even thence thou wilt be stol'n, I fear,
For truth proves thievish for a prize so dear.
小弟試譯為現代英文,見笑了:
Whenever I have to go away, I would carefully lock up all my possessions, so that they would stay away from the hands of thieves.
But you, compared to whom my jewels are mere trifles, the chief source of my comfort and now my biggest worry, become the prey of every common thief.
I can't lock you up in any place, except only in my heart; I know in reality you're not there, but I just like to feel that you are. And it's a place where you can come at go as you please.
But still I fear you'll be stolen even from there, because so dear a prize would turn an honest person into a thief.
再譯為中文:
遠行之際,我總會小心翼翼的鎖好所有物件,生怕賊人有機可乘。可是,最重要的你,卻偏偏鎖不住。你本來是我最大的慰藉,現在卻成為我最大的擔憂:我離開了,世上賊人都蠢蠢欲動,要把你偷走。我唯一能做的,是自欺欺人的想,已經把你鎖在心裡 。但即使如此,我仍怕別人會把你從我的心偷走;因為面對如此貴重的寶物,即使最誠實的人也會心動。
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